The sound here is relatively small, so it's okay to express it simple.
but 2:19.916~2:20.942 It sounds very similar to the melody here.
I think the same thing is better.
due to the frequent usage of timing points for more accurate timings, some timing/measure/bpm line weirdness goes on in the map, and this is one example
making use of the option in the timing point editor to hide a certain timing point's lines, please hide some of the lines introduced with the timing points so that it doesn't look as messy
ideally there would be one line every measure, but as long as it looks "natural" it's fine
actually there's also some incorrect beat snap coloring as well, if you wanna try fixing it you can try using the plugin I made exactly for this purpose
alternatively dm me on discord and I'll just fix it for you, since it's kind of a pain to explain
overall map is kinda SPICY, a lot of patterns feel very strange / unbalanced and they overall just look not that good sometimes (played with NLN)
if you wish to rank it go ahead, but I think it might be better to drop this and think about it again in a few months so you can improve the patterns to be a lot more enjoyable on some parts
It needs to be differentiated from the jumps just below.
can i just make it jumptrill
i don't think these kind of sound are on 1/3 because they are clearly on 1/4, they should be like this. also check again in the other places like this
1:37.096~1:37.865
Differentiation of these parts will be necessary.
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The two melodies are similar, so it would be more fun if they were similar.
It would be cool if the LN of the mod below was applied here as well.
The sound here is relatively small, so it's okay to express it simple.
but 2:19.916~2:20.942 It sounds very similar to the melody here.
I think the same thing is better.
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It should be the same as these.
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
no. it is 'Suggestion' not issue
and 3:10.429~3:11.391 same
aplied
All of these are ambiguous.
In fact, a lot is missing in other parts, and some are less expressive.
I think it would be better if the note was single.
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5666
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
Follow the drums so double
This long note can be made similarly.
https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/56994/mods#mod_5670
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It's the same as this, so it shouldn't be a 1/3 LN stream.
align ln end with the others
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shouldn't these be lns to be consistent with before?
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missnapped?
No strong drum, so this should be a single.
should be mapped to 1/3 instead
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177096|4,177096|3,177160|2,177224|4,177288|3,177352|2,177416|1,177481|3,177545|4,177609|3,177673|2,177737|1,177801|2,177865|3,177865|4,177929|2,177929|1,177993|3,177993|4,178058|2,178058|1,178122|4,178122|3,178207|1,178293|2,178378|4,178464|3,178549|1,178634|2 sounds to me this section is 1/6
making this section all ln seems unnecessary to me
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section should be made more interesting
instead of having constant 1/2 jumps, try mapping the jumps to the melody
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could maybe vary the chordjack rhythm a bit by incorporating the melodic rhythm
three notes
move earlier 1/4 beat
pattern rhythm isn't accurate but i do like it
rearrange the chords in this section so that the hands are always jacks in their columns
so for example these hands should both be [124]
I'd also try to make it so that jumps only share one column with adjacent hands
so for example the first five chords might be [124][124][13][234][234]
try something like this instead
move album name from tags to source
section here should be 1/3 and/or 1/6
notes here are snapped weirdly
due to the frequent usage of timing points for more accurate timings, some timing/measure/bpm line weirdness goes on in the map, and this is one example
making use of the option in the timing point editor to hide a certain timing point's lines, please hide some of the lines introduced with the timing points so that it doesn't look as messy
ideally there would be one line every measure, but as long as it looks "natural" it's fine
actually there's also some incorrect beat snap coloring as well, if you wanna try fixing it you can try using the plugin I made exactly for this purpose
alternatively dm me on discord and I'll just fix it for you, since it's kind of a pain to explain
missnapped
note snaps are still kinda weird, something like this would work better
SVs dont flow well at all imo
overall map is kinda SPICY, a lot of patterns feel very strange / unbalanced and they overall just look not that good sometimes (played with NLN)
if you wish to rank it go ahead, but I think it might be better to drop this and think about it again in a few months so you can improve the patterns to be a lot more enjoyable on some parts
dont take it as an insult, just my honest opinion
I think this map is fine. And why should you play with NLN but this map only has very very light LN? Also what SV are you pointing at?
chordjacks could potentially be replaced with something more interesting
maybe a more dumpy stream pattern
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