You could probably represent the drum and hat here since it feels really empty without it.
You could probably remove this as it's just the vowel in "be" (in "began") being extended
Triple for snare
I think the emphasis of these should be flipped, as it goes kick -> hat, similar to 91371.
Consider changing these all to doubles as you don't seem to map kicks as triples elsewhere.
Consider removing (or at least changing this to a single) this as there isn't a really audible drum, rather just a light hat sound.
Shift this note back 1/4 so it syncs better with the vocals.
You could probably represent the drum and hat here since it feels really empty without it.
You could probably remove this as it's just the vowel in "be" (in "began") being extended
Triple for snare
I think the emphasis of these should be flipped, as it goes kick -> hat, similar to 91371.
Consider changing these all to doubles as you don't seem to map kicks as triples elsewhere.
Consider removing (or at least changing this to a single) this as there isn't a really audible drum, rather just a light hat sound.
Shift this note back 1/4 so it syncs better with the vocals.