Shift this note back 1/4 so it syncs better with the vocals.
Consider removing (or at least changing this to a single) this as there isn't a really audible drum, rather just a light hat sound.
Consider changing these all to doubles as you don't seem to map kicks as triples elsewhere.
I think the emphasis of these should be flipped, as it goes kick -> hat, similar to 91371.
Triple for snare
You could probably remove this as it's just the vowel in "be" (in "began") being extended
You could probably represent the drum and hat here since it feels really empty without it.
Shift this note back 1/4 so it syncs better with the vocals.
Consider removing (or at least changing this to a single) this as there isn't a really audible drum, rather just a light hat sound.
Consider changing these all to doubles as you don't seem to map kicks as triples elsewhere.
I think the emphasis of these should be flipped, as it goes kick -> hat, similar to 91371.
Triple for snare
You could probably remove this as it's just the vowel in "be" (in "began") being extended
You could probably represent the drum and hat here since it feels really empty without it.