LNs here onwards just feels out of place, although there are background melodies, they are rather insignificant to be represented with 1/4 LNs; and other than that 220829 these 1/2 LNs serves no purpose when it is not entirely following the melody, and I would suggest just removing them all
From here onwards, the doubles before a minijack doesn't really follow a consistency, 30657, 32036, 32553, 34795 and so on, I'm assuming the doubles are for vocals, so 34795 and 36174 would be inconsistent
These vocals should be represented with singles even if you're going for a "mild tense up" section, since in the previous section you did single for vocals
i feel like the sounds that the 1/4 LNs are trying to represent are too faint to be highlighted with 1/4 LNs, so it's a bit confusing what they are mapped to. i think that it's better if you change the 1/4 LNs to regular notes and keep the 1/2 LNs to prevent the section from being monotonous to play
i think that you should add notes to the vocals here since you mapped the vocals for most part, it'll help with making the section more interesting to play
From 208588 to 209795 I think you should put more emphasis on the drums and map it more accurately
This is a tad bit too tight for comfort, might wanna make the jump proceeding the quad a single and making the quad a hand or something similar
Same issue with long anchor
LNs here onwards just feels out of place, although there are background melodies, they are rather insignificant to be represented with 1/4 LNs; and other than that 220829 these 1/2 LNs serves no purpose when it is not entirely following the melody, and I would suggest just removing them all
This here should be a constant stream, I feel the jacks here underrepresented the rhythm
In my opinion they feel fine and fun to play.
nvm lol i took a better listen to the audio my bad
Feels mildly empty here, could use some simple single note anchor jacks
An extremely long anchor
The drum is in 1/6 not 1/4
I found the other one 252467
ps no note on 252381, only the 1/6ths
Melodies here, maybe chart them?
From here onwards, the doubles before a minijack doesn't really follow a consistency, 30657, 32036, 32553, 34795 and so on, I'm assuming the doubles are for vocals, so 34795 and 36174 would be inconsistent
These vocals should be represented with singles even if you're going for a "mild tense up" section, since in the previous section you did single for vocals
Same goes for 82036, but for 187036 this feels really really empty, maybe an LN here would work
i feel like the sounds that the 1/4 LNs are trying to represent are too faint to be highlighted with 1/4 LNs, so it's a bit confusing what they are mapped to. i think that it's better if you change the 1/4 LNs to regular notes and keep the 1/2 LNs to prevent the section from being monotonous to play
i think that you should add notes to the vocals here since you mapped the vocals for most part, it'll help with making the section more interesting to play