I Can't Fix You (feat. Crusher-P)
The Living Tombstone

Created by: cinna
Submitted: over 2 years ago
Ranked: almost 2 years ago
Source: n/a
Tags:
fnaf, five nights at freddy's, drum and bass, chordjack, dubstep
BPM: 174
Length: 4:17
Passes/Fails: 1097 / 9404

[4K] 26.32 - Molten

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Hikari Zero
User
about 2 years ago

i think that you should add notes to the vocals here since you mapped the vocals for most part, it'll help with making the section more interesting to play

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Issue
2nil
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

From 208588 to 209795 I think you should put more emphasis on the drums and map it more accurately

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

These vocals should be represented with singles even if you're going for a "mild tense up" section, since in the previous section you did single for vocals


Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

Same goes for 82036, but for 187036 this feels really really empty, maybe an LN here would work

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

From here onwards, the doubles before a minijack doesn't really follow a consistency, 30657, 32036, 32553, 34795 and so on, I'm assuming the doubles are for vocals, so 34795 and 36174 would be inconsistent

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Suggestion
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

Melodies here, maybe chart them?

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

The drum is in 1/6 not 1/4


Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

I found the other one 252467

Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

ps no note on 252381, only the 1/6ths

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Issue
Hikari Zero
User
about 2 years ago

i feel like the sounds that the 1/4 LNs are trying to represent are too faint to be highlighted with 1/4 LNs, so it's a bit confusing what they are mapped to. i think that it's better if you change the 1/4 LNs to regular notes and keep the 1/2 LNs to prevent the section from being monotonous to play

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Suggestion
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

Feels mildly empty here, could use some simple single note anchor jacks

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

This here should be a constant stream, I feel the jacks here underrepresented the rhythm


cinna
Creator
almost 2 years ago

In my opinion they feel fine and fun to play.

cinna
Creator
almost 2 years ago

nvm lol i took a better listen to the audio my bad

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

LNs here onwards just feels out of place, although there are background melodies, they are rather insignificant to be represented with 1/4 LNs; and other than that 220829 these 1/2 LNs serves no purpose when it is not entirely following the melody, and I would suggest just removing them all

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

Same issue with long anchor

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Issue
2nil
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

This is a tad bit too tight for comfort, might wanna make the jump proceeding the quad a single and making the quad a hand or something similar

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Issue
Argo Northrop
Ranking Supervisor
almost 2 years ago

An extremely long anchor