The Feels

TWICE

i didn't look through the entire thing thoroughly but ping me in #mapping or dm me if you have any questions

some of the things i pointed out repeat in parts that have copy-pasted layering and/or patterning, i didn't point out every repetition

there's a couple parts with seemingly unintended hand-bias such as 124068|1,124068|4,124068|2,124193|3,124318|4,124443|4,124568|1,124568|3,124568|4,124568|2,124693|1,124693|2,124693|3,124818|1,124818|4,124818|3,124943|1,124943|3,124943|4,125068|1,125068|2,125068|4,125193|2,125193|3,125318|4,125443|1,125443|2,125443|3,125568|1,125568|3,125568|4,125568|2,125693|4

i would suggest you play through the map in a regular session on the highest rate you can play it with consistency (as in more than just an hp pass) to help identify these parts

01:21.069 - 01:37.069 (second verse)

why did you stop putting hands for every kick here? you did that in the first verse. they only seem to be on the snare here

it looks like you're overlooking some kicks and snares throughout the map, or the representation is inconsistent

quad for snare?

should be jumps for vocals?

feel like this deserves more than just a single ln for a relatively big synth hit

should be hand (kick)

should be hand (kick+snare)

can refer back to both https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/75609/mods#mod_8100 and https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/75609/mods#mod_8096

should be a jump for vocal

seems like these could be jumps considering some of your previous choices

missed syllable? should be jump

this jump in particular feels out of place when the next two jumps have directly corresponding syllables

can also refer back to https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/75609/mods#mod_8096

why are these jumps if the following notes with the same vocal harmonies are not?

at the very least i think 25818|2 should be a jump

similar issue to https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/75609/mods#mod_8096

refer to https://quavergame.com/mapset/map/75609/mods#mod_8096

i can tell that you're doing it for this sound in particular, but it still leaves questions as to why the same isn't done in similar situations where it would be just as fitting

this jump for vocal blends together with the previous hands due to both notes ([34]) of it being in the hand preceding it ([134])

also creates unrelated 3-note anchors on 3rd and 4th columns

i would suggest rearranging the patterning for this part to make each note stand out

why is this a jump? if it's for the special vocal note/harmony, why not use jumps for the entire duration of it? meaning 15318|3,15443|1 would also be jumps

when looking further into the chart it seems like you do this in several places, but what is the logic behind it?
why is 16193|3 not a jump for example? or 20693|4?

i have made some other issues that refer back to this one

should be hand (kick+snare)

should be hand (kick)

why is this a jump? no vocal here